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Personal Narrative

At first I struggled with the narrative because I could not come up with a topic. When I finally thought of my topic it was easy for me to write. The topic I picked was easy for me to jot down vivid details. I first made a bubble for the topic then I split it into vivid detail, emotions, and story. I had so much stuff to put I did not think was going to have enough time to finish, but eventually I did.

The biggest thing I am struggling with are commas and significance. For some reason I do not do well spotting out where commas need to go. And for significance I am not sure if my story has enough significance or not. It is hard to tell. Other than that I think my piece is doing well right now.    

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  1. AnonymousSeptember 20, 2017 at 7:27 PM

    I agree to most of the issues you have. Finding the topic was challenging for me too.

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