Johnny and Brad walk into the kitchen trying to hide their face from their mother, Brenda.
"How was it?" called Brenda from the living room.
"What?" Johnny responded pretending to not know what she is talking about.
"Swim Practice!" responded Brenda starting to get impatient.
Brad knew he had to speak up,"We forgot".
Brenda walks into the Kitchen gritting her teeth, "How could you!?"
Johnny's face turns bright red and responds quietly, "We are sorry".
Brad looks around to escape this stiff situation and finally picks up his and waves it at his mother saying, "gotta go" and pretends to be talking to someone.
Johnny is still standing there knowing she knows that he didn't want to actually go.
He is trying to figure out how he is going to get out of this and then a light bulb pops up, "Brad's idea" and then runs off to go hide for what could come next.
Brenda sitting there in amusement just laughs and says relentlessly, "both punished", and traverses to the living room finishing her cooking show.
"How was it?" called Brenda from the living room.
"What?" Johnny responded pretending to not know what she is talking about.
"Swim Practice!" responded Brenda starting to get impatient.
Brad knew he had to speak up,"We forgot".
Brenda walks into the Kitchen gritting her teeth, "How could you!?"
Johnny's face turns bright red and responds quietly, "We are sorry".
Brad looks around to escape this stiff situation and finally picks up his and waves it at his mother saying, "gotta go" and pretends to be talking to someone.
Johnny is still standing there knowing she knows that he didn't want to actually go.
He is trying to figure out how he is going to get out of this and then a light bulb pops up, "Brad's idea" and then runs off to go hide for what could come next.
Brenda sitting there in amusement just laughs and says relentlessly, "both punished", and traverses to the living room finishing her cooking show.
Good intriguing story. I really liked how I could interact with story because of the dialogue. I also like how you used a situation between a child and their parent because almost everyone has had a interaction like that.
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