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Strengths and Weaknesses

I am good at ideas and knowing what I wanted to write about. My word use is pretty good too. I usually just write my whole paper and then go through it and replace it with bigger words that sound more sophisticated. I don't know why but ideas are easy to generate. 

My weakness is definitely the structure of my paper. I am not good at knowing what goes at the beginning, middle, and end of the paper. My end of the paper isn't that strong either because I don't know weather to leave the readers with something to think about or just to end it. 

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  1. MarthaApril 30, 2018 at 2:57 PM

    I totally agree with you about structure! I had trouble with that during my personal narrative, and a little in my research paper.

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